User talk:72.83.149.163

Hi, and welcome to Wikivoyage.

It's great that you are taking an interest in improving the Wheaton guide, but it seems that you may be getting rid of any subjective, lively writing, in favor of a sort of NPOV style reminiscent of Wikipedia. Wikivoyage actually wants that sort of subjective, lively writing. Please see Tone and Be fair. Maybe also take a look at some of our star articles, to get an idea of what we're striving for.

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--Peter Talk 04:49, 15 January 2013 (UTC)