User talk:198.151.130.143

Welcome, and thanks for plunging forward and adding a lot of content to the Delaware guide. However, state-level guides are not the places for lots of bulleted listings - the way we organize this site is to put those in city-level guides. So if you would please go back to the Delaware guide and give a prose summary of some highlights to see in the "See" section and some highlighted activities to do in the "Do" section, that would be great. Right now, the list in "Do" is too long for a non-expert to figure out how to summarize it. In terms of the listings themselves, if they aren't already in appropriate city guides, please move them there, but some of the listings will need to be edited for tone to avoid seeming to tout, rather than merely describing. It might be relevant to you to look at the Welcome, tourism professionals page. We love to work with tourism agencies, but our goals are somewhat different from theirs: We may want to on some level promote travel in general, but in specific destination guides, we want to describe things engagingly but accurately, to inform the traveling public. Tourism agencies and visitors' bureaus, by contrast, are motivated by promoting their towns, regions, or states. Therefore, if you do work for a tourism agency, please watch your tone here a bit.

Thanks so much, and I hope you do come back, to add more information to city/town guides and help summarize the highlights of what there is to see and do in Delaware.

All the best,

Ikan Kekek (talk) 11:16, 23 February 2014 (UTC)